Veze1000

draft 2 of the first part of this fan fic, considerable improvement but i still think its horrible.  it just lacks a certain writing style...detail i guess, idk here is chapters 1-3.  tell me what you guys think plz. probably another draft after this one. also im just copy pasting from my google document.  so excuse how it is formatted on DA My Little Pony: Friendship is Eternal Chapter One A Last Goodbye In a faraway land, much different than our own, is a land known as Equestria.  It is a strange place, filled with countless wonders and mysteries, yet isolated from the rest of the world.  It hosts a variety of environments, ranging fr

WARNING: ONCE AGAIN THIS IS ONLY AN OUTLINE IF ANYTHING, THIS IS NOT TO BE TAKEN AS A SERIOUS FIC UNTIL I GET TO THE 3RD DRAFT, THIS IS DRAFT ONE, AND I WILL NOT BE GOING BACK TO FIX ANYTHING TILL IM DONE WITH THE WHOLE OUTLINE.  THERE IS ABOUT 3 MORE PAGES OF THE INTRO, THEN WE MOVE INTO THE RISING ACTION!!! this is now dedicated to my dog, Dusty, he passed away on 1/9/12.  He was 7 years old and a miniature schnauzer.  I loved him very much and he was a good friend when I had none. Pinkie Pie "Come on now All Heart, we have another party to cater today," said Pinkie Pie, as she woke up All Heart from her bed.  "Ughh…she said," as s

i know like 0 people actually care.  i know my fan fic is stupid and sucks.  i wont be posting anything tonight most likely.  my dog has been taken to an animal hospital for emergency treatment, i cant think of anything to write until he is home and i know he is ok.